Posted by: SilentFred | February 5, 2010

The Tyranny of the Incomplete

I’ve hit an interesting place in my writing life over the past couple of months. For the first time since I began writing “seriously,” I have a backlog of partially-finished stories. My pattern up to this point has been to work on one story at a time, finish it, submit it for publication, then move on to the next story. That’s worked out pretty well so far.

Now, I find myself with six stories in various stages of completion–two flash, two short stories, and two novels. Being a person who craves closure, this is an uncomfortable situation. Not as bad as writer’s block, but not what I’d call my “happy place.”

So, what should I do about it?

What I’m doing at the moment is a sort of undisciplined parallel process, where I’m working on whichever story I feel inspired to tackle at the moment, but all projects are simultaneously on the front burner.

Alternative approaches might include:

1. Make my current process more disciplined by scheduling each project on a daily/weekly basis so they all get a set amount of work, in rotation.

2. Put one or more of the unfinished projects on the back burner, leaving the ones I think are more important or have a better chance of being completed soon in the rotation, then moving the back burner projects to the front as others are finished.

3. Prioritize the uncompleted projects and revert to my old process of working one project exclusively until it’s finished, then move on to the next until I’ve exhausted my backlog.

Prioritization isn’t that simple, either. The shorter projects can be pushed out quickly and keep fresh writing from me in the public eye. The novel-sized projects have a greater potential return in both money and attention, but they are all-consuming. If I’m working on a novel, I’m not writing anything else.

I’ll probably be pondering this issue for a while. If anybody has a different idea or an approach that works for them, I’d be glad to hear it.

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Posted by: SilentFred | February 3, 2010

Sightseeing in Vancouver

As I mentioned a couple of days ago, my trip to Vancouver for the Every Day Fiction Two launch event wasn’t all business. My lovely wife took a couple of days off work to come with me, and her mom, who lives in California and doesn’t get to see us nearly enough, met us in Seattle. Since this was our first visit to Vancouver, we allowed an extra day to see some of the sights around town, and I’m glad we did.

We arrived in Seattle at about noon on Thursday, January 29. I would have preferred to fly directly into Vancouver, but it would have nearly doubled the airfare. We rented a car and drove the rest of the way, a little less than three hours north on Interstate 5, a very pleasant, scenic drive with some nice views of downtown Seattle, the Space Needle, and Puget Sound.

I’d read some reports of travelers getting delayed at the border, what with the new passport requirements and all, but we zipped through the Canadian checkpoint without incident after answering a few polite questions. I noted that the Canadian checkpoint was clean, attractive, and very welcoming. The U.S. side was badly in need of a fresh coat of paint and resembled the back gate of an Army post on the BRAC list. C’mon, Uncle Sam, these are our friends and allies. We can do better.

Entering the metro area, our first glimpses of downtown Vancouver were breathtaking. The city is surrounded by water, and the skyline is studded with tall, shining high-rises, with the snowy peaks of the Cascades in the background. Picture postcard stuff. We crossed the bridge into downtown and descended into the maze of skyscrapers, fortunately only taking one false turn before locating our hotel.

The folks at EDF had recommended a downtown hotel, the Kingston, and I was a little apprehensive about it–small downtown inns and their neighborhoods have often seen better days, and my lovely wife is very selective about where she lodges. My fears were unfounded. From the cheerful welcome at the front desk, to the well-tended interior, to the immaculate, cozy room, all our expectations were exceeded. We had dinner at the adjoining Kingston Tap House and Grille, which provided both great food and great service. I’d recommend the Kingston to anyone pondering a few days’ stay in Vancouver.

After dinner, we took a short stroll around the neighborhood, and it didn’t take long to find evidence of the ongoing preparations for the 2010 Winter Olympics. The town was all dressed up with signs, banners, building-wide murals, and art displays. An entire street was cordoned off just a couple of blocks from the hotel, foot traffic only, to accommodate a sculpture garden with a variety of abstract art and a small “forest” hung with paper lanterns decorated by local school children. Some of the lanterns had an Olympic theme, some drew inspiration from local Native American culture, and a few…took their own path. One austere drawing in black crayon depicted a wall switch with the label, “Always turn the lights off.”

There were a lot of people out and about, even though the Olympics were still a couple of weeks away and most of the athletes and spectators hadn’t arrived yet. We were struck by how young everyone seemed to be. Most of the crowd was twenty-somethings, and it was a challenge to find anyone who looked older than forty. It felt a little like we’d stumbled onto the set of Logan’s Run. We were told later that downtown Vancouver was dominated by college students and young professionals–the older folks preferred living on the outskirts of town or in the country.

Downtown was in pretty good shape. There was a fair bit of ongoing construction in preparation for the Olympics–lots of cranes and lifts about, new signs and facades being put into place, some of the areas for concerts and other activities under assembly. On the down side, there were a lot of panhandlers on the street corners and around the transit stations, and our hotel clerk warned us against the unsecured parking garages, prime targets for car thieves.

After a good night’s sleep, we had a light breakfast at the hotel and set out for a day of touristing. We drove north to Stanley Park, a forested peninsula that juts out into the harbor. There was a display of replica totem poles there, but the real attraction was the view of Vancouver and the surrounding mountains. A couple of barges moored in the harbor carried Olympic rings and other decorations, perhaps part of an upcoming fireworks show or nighttime display.

Also in Stanley Park was the Vancouver Aquarium, which we didn’t tour, mostly because the admission price was so high ($22). Fortunately, the Aquarium’s big draw, several beluga whales, were visible from a public viewing area adjoining the Aquarium, so we didn’t feel like we’d missed out too badly.

After exploring Stanley Park, we made our way to Granville Island, an artsy-craftsy marketplace area on the south side of downtown. It took a little doing to find the single entrance, and parking, like parking everywhere in Vancouver, was a challenge. We finally got in and enjoyed a delicious lunch at the Public Market food court, which offered a broad selection of ethnic cuisine and fresh baked goods.

We strolled through a few of the shops, then set out for the Museum of Anthropology at the University of British Columbia. We could easily have spent the entire day there and not seen half their collection of artifacts from cultures around the world, including a huge offering of art, clothing, and jewelry from the First Nations tribes of British Columbia. There was also a sizable collection of ceramics donated by one of the museum’s founders, and a small area devoted to modern art from local Native American artists. The totem poles and carved house posts inside and outside the museum dwarfed the ones we’d seen at Stanley Park.

One of the most impressive pieces on display was “Raven and the First Men,” a sculpture in yellow cedar by Haida artist Bill Reid that captured the weight of an ancient legend in a very fresh way, honoring the old and the new simultaneously.

Dinner that night took a little finding–there’s lots of street food and many tiny walk-up cafes in downtown Vancouver, but finding a moderately-priced sit-down restaurant was challenging. We ended up at a Red Robin, not exactly what we wanted, but it was good enough. My wife became convinced that Heinz ketchup had a different formulation in Canada, and she liked it…a lot. I now have to figure out how to order a bottle of Canadian ketchup via the internet, as nothing else will ever quite measure up. Perhaps on e-Bay.

That pretty much concluded our sightseeing in Vancouver, although my wife and I took a walk later and explored the underground malls adjoining the subway stations. Vancouver has an extensive network of subways, trains, and buses, and if I hadn’t already rented a car, I would have taken full advantage.

Vancouver is a “green” city that caters to pedestrians and cyclists, and driving a car around is subtly (and sometimes not so subtly) discouraged. Navigating and maneuvering downtown is difficult. Parking is a nightmare. When you can find parking, it’s very expensive, and there’s no such thing as free parking (or at least an open free slot) until you cross the bridges that separate the city center from the ‘burbs. Any major attraction features both a steep admission fee and metered/ticketed parking.

But that was a minor annoyance. Vancouver is beautiful, with lots of things to do and see, even in the winter. The people are friendly, helpful, and accommodating, and they’re very proud of their city. Not once did I get honked at or hassled by a local driver for hesitating, driving slower than the posted limit, or making a less-than-graceful lane change. We were blessed with unseasonably pleasant weather for sightseeing, with only a few brief periods of drizzly rain, nothing that stopped us from going outside.

We had a great time, and we’ll be back. Perhaps as we watch the Winter Olympics coverage, we’ll catch a glimpse of some landmark we saw during our visit. Thanks, Vancouver!

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Posted by: SilentFred | February 2, 2010

Scribbler’s Scoreboard, January ‘10

A little late posting this after last week’s trip, but catching up. January was a pretty good month, submission-wise, not so much acceptance-wise, but I’m hopeful the fruits of January’s effort will emerge farther down the line. Biggest news was the publication of my flash story, “Half,” online at Every Day Fiction and the re-publication of my flash story, “Little Piece of Cloth,” in the Every Day Fiction Two print anthology. “Come You Back to Mandalay” passed the first cut at Allegory, final decision expected near the end of February.

The January Scoreboard:

7 Jan: “A Taste of Honey” submitted to Wily Writers Speculative Fiction

7 Jan: “The Devil’s Temp” submitted to PodCastle

7 Jan: 6-hour rejection from PodCastle for “The Devil’s Temp”

9 Jan: “The Devil’s Temp” submitted to Drabblecast

9 Jan: “Come You Back to Mandalay” submitted to Allegory

9 Jan: “Bullies With Big Fat Heads” submitted to Everyday Weirdness

13 Jan: “Half” published in Every Day Fiction

23 Jan: “Promises” submitted to Triangulation Anthology Series

30 Jan: 7-day rejection from Triangulation Anthology Series for “Promises”

30 Jan: “Little Piece of Cloth” published in Every Day Fiction Two print anthology

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Posted by: SilentFred | February 2, 2010

February Banner Image

“People all over the world…join hands…start a love train, love train…”

In honor of Valentine’s Day, this month’s banner features a choo-choo full-a-burnin’-love, and what says “I wuv U” better than a puppy in an engineer cap?

Like all trains appearing here, this choo-choo runs on subjective time, fueled by environmentally-friendly candy hearts that say things like “Hubba Hubba” and “O U Kid.”

The original image can be found at www.suzykendall.com, along with a ton of other vintage postcard valentines for everyone young at heart and long of memory.

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Posted by: SilentFred | February 1, 2010

Every Day Fiction Two Anthology Launch

Home again after a very pleasant four-day trip to Vancouver, B.C., for the Best of Every Day Fiction Two launch event. We took an extra day to do a little sightseeing in and around Vancouver. More on the purely recreational part of the trip tomorrow. Since I’m a professional, I’ll give you the business first.

Every Day Fiction (EDF) is an online magazine featuring a new work of flash fiction every day of the year, just like the name says. Stories span the gamut of styles and genres, and contributors hail from around the world. They’ve published four of my flash stories so far, and selected one of them, “Little Piece of Cloth,” to be part of this year’s print anthology. Schedule, money, and cheap airfares to the northwest came together in a harmonious conjunction, so I was able to attend the launch event in Vancouver on January 30.

The official program started with a roundtable discussion about EDF and flash fiction, conducted over lunch at the Kingston Tap House & Grille, a cozy little pub in downtown Vancouver. This was my first opportunity to meet the EDF staff in-person, and they were very friendly and enthusiastic about their enterprise and about writing. We talked about the appeal of flash fiction in a hurried and increasingly wired world, the challenge of building awareness of flash fiction among the public at large, and opportunities for expanding the influence, reputation, and profitability of EDF.

Editors Camille Gooderham Campbell and Jordan Lapp are exploring ways to increase the level of payments to contributing writers, attract participation by “name” authors, and generally raise the magazine’s profile and prestige among readers and reviewers. They’re working to extend EDF’s publishing activities into print (the annual anthology being the first step in that direction) and other forms of electronic media. The EDF staff is also trying to build a community of writers around their website that will provide opportunities for networking, skills development, and critique of works in progress.

It was a great conversation. These are smart, creative people with a passion for promoting the art of flash fiction. They love what they’re doing with EDF and are in it for the long haul.

About 4pm, we assembled at the Cedar Cottage Coffee House in southeast Vancouver for the book launch. In-between coffee and some tasty hors d’oeuvres provided by the Cedar Cottage staff, fellow contributor Andrew Boden and I read our stories, “Dry Fire,” and “Little Piece of Cloth,” chatted with folks, and signed books. Everything was very cozy and informal, we sold quite a few books, made some new friends, and everybody had a great time.

By the way, Andrew’s story is a great example of the emotional punch a well-written flash fiction story can deliver. If you haven’t read it yet, you should.

Later that evening, we reconvened at the Kingston Tap House for a post-event celebration. I had a nice chat with EDF webmaster Steven Smethurst , who gave me a few tips for upgrading my writing website and leveraging Google and other search resources to generate more hits.

Last, but not least, kudos to EDF Marketing and PR director Kevin Young for a great job setting up the event and coordinating everything with the Kingston Hotel, the Tap House, and Cedar Cottage.

Tomorrow, I’ll talk about the recreational part of the trip, our whirlwind tour of the fair city of Vancouver.

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As you read this, I’m probably driving (North!) along a rain-spattered highway from Seattle to Vancouver, B.C., where I’ll be participating in the launch event for The Best of Every Day Fiction Two anthology, which includes one of my short stories.

Enough about me…you’re here for North! Or Be Eaten.

Today, I’m going to focus on the websites for the Wingfeather Saga (of which North! Or Be Eaten is the second volume), and the author. So, read on…Or Be Eaten.

The Wingfeather Saga Online

This website provides a nice introduction and a point of contact between Peterson and his readers. The home page is a newsblog of events, trivia, and other items of interest related to the books. Sub-pages include:

  • Welcome – A brief introduction to the series.
  • Books – Cover images and links to purchase
  • Creaturepedia – A compendium of strange beasts featured in the books, with illustrations by Andrew Peterson and Justin Gerard. I must confess I found the Toothy Cow a little underwhelming–sort of a Jersey/St. Bernard crossbreed with all of the drooling and none of the charm. I expect they’re scarier in the stories.
  • Encyclopedia – A list of people, places, and things from the books.
  • Maps – Cartography of the world of Aerwiar, where the story is set.
  • Art by YOU – Very cool. Peterson posts drawings from young fans of the Wingfeather Saga.
  • Guestbook – A place to check in and leave comments.
  • A Note to Parents – Peterson provides a brief explanation of who he is and what he’s about with these books. Anybody wondering whether he’s a Christian author and/or if he intended to include Christian themes in his stories should find their questions answered here.

Andrew Peterson’s Author Website

Andrew Peterson has a lot going on, and this is where you can find out all about it. He’s an author. He’s an artist. He’s a singer/songwriter. He has a band–a real one, with a record contract and a tour schedule. He won a Dove Award for his song, “Family Man.” He even wrote a few songs for VeggieTales (I’ll say it again, I want to party with this guy). He’s also created a community of like-minded creative folk called “The Rabbit Room” (more on that later). Subpages include:

  • Home – Links to everything else, plus a sign-up form for his mailing list.
  • Shows – Tour schedule for readings and concerts.
  • Bio – Just what it says.
  • Music – List of his albums, with jacket art and links to purchase.
  • Books – List of his books, with cover art and links to purchase.
  • Forum – A place to chat with Andrew Peterson and his fans.
  • Promote – Advertising boodle, including webpage banners and a free song download.
  • Contact – Information on how to get in touch with Peterson or book a concert.
  • Store – A place to purchase stuff from Peterson and his associates. If you absolutely must have a real Toothy Cow tooth, you can get it here.

The Rabbit Room

Grownups who want more insight into Andrew Peterson and his circle of friends can catch a glimpse here. Peterson founded The Rabbit Room as a gathering place for artists in search of community, “artists who believe in the power of old tales, tales as old as the earth itself, who find hope in them and beauty in the shadows and in the light and in the source of the light.”

Here you’ll find “writings and reviews by artists and appreciators of art, conversations about creation, storytelling, songwriting, and the long journey of becoming who we’re meant to be.” As he explains in his lengthy introduction to The Rabbit Room, Peterson was deeply influenced by the work and example of C.S. Lewis and the Inklings, and is trying to achieve a similar dynamic of shared inspiration.  There’s a lot of stuff here, by eleven or so different writers, musicians, and artists, and it makes for an interesting meander.

That concludes my piece of this month’s CSFF Blog Tour. I usually bring in a selection of comments from other folks on the tour for Day 3, but I don’t think I’ll be able to manage that during my road trip. You’ll get a better picture by going directly to their blogs anyhow. Please do so…Or Be Eaten.

Next month, we’ll take a journey into the land of the fey folk with R.J. Anderson’s Faery Rebels: Spell Hunter. Cheery, whimsical sprites, these are not. See you then!

Series site - http://wingfeathersaga.com/?p=464
Author site – http://www.andrew-peterson.com/

Brandon Barr
Justin Boyer
Amy Browning
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
Jeff Draper
April Erwin
Todd Michael Greene
Ryan Heart
Timothy Hicks
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Dawn King
Rebecca LuElla Miller
New Authors Fellowship
Nissa
Donita K. Paul
Crista Richey
Chawna Schroeder
Andrea Schultz
James Somers
Steve and Andrew
Rachel Starr Thomson
Robert Treskillard
Jason Waguespac
Phyllis Wheeler
Elizabeth Williams
KM Wilsher

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Happy 2010, everybody, and welcome back to the Christian Science Fiction and Fantasy Blog Tour! This month, we’re reviewing Andrew Peterson’s young-adult fantasy adventure, North! Or Be Eaten.

Okay, you can’t help but love a title like, “North! Or Be Eaten.”

But first, Truth-in-Advertising Time:

1. I haven’t read the book. My review copy didn’t arrive (hmm, perhaps it was…eaten).

2. I’m traveling this week (North!), so I had to write my first two posts several days in advance. My dutiful blog-bot will post them at 6am on the appropriate morning. Please feel free to comment, but it may be a couple of days before I reply. Depending on how my trip is going, I may not make a third post this time.

All right, you smart-alecks, hold the applause.

Neither 1 nor 2 is a huge problem. Even without reading the book, I can discuss what other people are saying about it and peruse the websites for the book and author. As to writing in advance, there’s really no way you can tell whether or not I’ve been doing that all along, or even whether it’s actually me writing or some demented, green-furred monster from a dimension beyond time. Or something.

So, Onward! North! Or Be Eaten! (That is so much fun to say. I never get tired of it.)

Synopsis

North! Or Be Eaten is the second book of the Wingfeather Saga. To bring everyone, including myself, up to speed, here is a summary of the first book, At the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness (heh, sounds like the standard internet gag: “Sea of Darkness is Dark!”). It’s from Mr. Peterson’s website, and though I usually prefer to summarize the tour books myself, I don’t think I can match this blurb:

Once, in a cottage above the cliffs on the Dark Sea of Darkness, there lived three children and their trusty dog Nugget. Janner Igiby, his brother Tink, their crippled sister Leeli are gifted children as all children are, loved well by a noble mother and ex-pirate grandfather. But they will need all their gifts and all that love to survive the evil pursuit of the venomous Fangs of Dang who have crossed the dark sea to rule the land with malice and pursue the Igibys who hold the secret to the lost legend and jewels of good King Wingfeather of the Shining Isle of Anniera.

Everybody got that? Cool. Now for the second volume. This synopsis is from Barnes&Noble.com (slightly edited for clarity), and again, not having read the book, I don’t think I can do better. If you haven’t read At the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, it seems there’s a major spoiler here, so be warned…Or Be Eaten.

Janner, Tink, and Leeli Igiby thought they were normal children with normal lives and a normal past. But now they know they’re really the Lost Jewels of Anniera, heirs to a legendary kingdom across the sea, and suddenly everyone wants to kill them.
In order to survive, the Igibys must flee to the safety of the Ice Prairies, where the lizardlike Fangs of Dang cannot follow. First, however, they have to escape the monsters of Glipwood Forest, the thieving Stranders of the East Bend, and the dreaded Fork Factory.

But even more dangerous are the jealousies and bitterness that threaten to tear them apart, and Janner and his siblings must learn the hard way that the love of a family is more important than anything else.

I want to party with this guy. Fangs of Dang? Stranders? Fork Factory? The review comments on Mr. Peterson’s webpage also mention the unambiguously malevolent Toothy Cows. There’s a very twisted sense of humor going on here, and I’m liking it.

Reviewer highlights

Almost everybody seems to have enjoyed this book very much. It’s carrying 4.5 out of 5 stars at Barnes&Noble.com, and 5 out of 5 on Amazon.com. For you statistics-hounds out there, of the 46 reviews posted on Amazon, only two were 3-star, seven were 4-star, and the rest were 5-star. Here are a smattering of comments from the Amazon reviews:

Positive (plenty of these)

“North or Be Eaten” was so intriguing that I read it in one night without putting it down.

Andrew’s descriptive language is so perfect that you feel as if you are right in the midst of the drama. More than once, I looked up to make sure that a Fang of Dang was not peering in through my window.

North! Or Be Eaten takes the series to the next level: deeper, darker, heart-wrenching, hilarious, hopeful, redemptive.

As a bonus, the story contains great lessons about growing up, treating your siblings right, recognizing and fighting injustice and oppression, and the imperfection of parents–yet presented extremely subtly and without an insulting, moralizing tone.

Negative (there weren’t many–I had to hunt for them)

Book two does change a bit from book one. For starters it’s much darker. In fact I’d say too dark for young children. I won’t be reading them to my kids any time soon. Secondly, it’s not nearly as funny.

A bit quirky (how many kids’ books have footnotes with hilarious “historical” descriptions of people, places, events and other local lore?), and a bit dark for the youngest readers–although not terribly graphic…The book starts out humorously, but quickly turns grim, sad, and full of guilt and shame. It’s a world with very little beauty, trust, safety, or mercy. I didn’t feel like the ending showed the boys learning “that the love of a family is more important than anything else.” In fact, I can’t think of any good lessons in the book. It was just so bleak and cruel, especially to the thousands of children in the book.
Non-Christians probably wouldn’t even know this book came from a Christian publisher. The book has no hint of Christian beliefs or religion. (On rare occasion, they do make a quick prayer to a monotheistic deity, but their religion makes no impact on their lives.)

I’ll take a closer look at the book and author websites and other marketing boodle in tomorrow’s installment. In the meantime, please pay a visit to the other fine sites on this month’s CSFF Blog Tour….Or Be Eaten!

Series site – http://wingfeathersaga.com/?p=464
Author site – http://www.andrew-peterson.com/

Brandon Barr
Justin Boyer
Amy Browning
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
Jeff Draper
April Erwin
Todd Michael Greene
Ryan Heart
Timothy Hicks
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Dawn King
Rebecca LuElla Miller
New Authors Fellowship
Nissa
Donita K. Paul
Crista Richey
Chawna Schroeder
Andrea Schultz
James Somers
Steve and Andrew
Rachel Starr Thomson
Robert Treskillard
Jason Waguespac
Phyllis Wheeler
Elizabeth Williams
KM Wilsher

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Posted by: SilentFred | January 25, 2010

Ink & Paint V: Cross Game, by Mitsuru Adachi

It’s only natural that  Koh Kitamura and Wakaba Tsukishima would get together. They were born at the same hospital on the same day. Their families live just down the road from each other. Koh’s father owns a sporting-goods store, and Wakaba’s family runs a batting cage and coffee shop.

On top of that, Wakaba has a dream that Koh will play in the Koshien, the national high-school baseball championship. The only trouble is, Koh doesn’t particularly like baseball, though he’s an ace hitter in the batting cage and has a natural flair for pitching.  Wakaba knows Koh could be the best pitcher in Japan, if he’d just put his mind to it.

Life has a way of throwing us curve balls. Tragedy strikes, and Koh decides he must make Wakaba’s dream come true, no matter what the cost. It’s not going to be easy. He’s got to realize his potential as a ballplayer, and a lot of people want to make sure that never happens. Fortunately, Koh has some talented allies, including Wakaba’s baseball-prodigy kid sister, a tough-guy catcher with a keen eye for the game, and an old geezer of a coach who might not be as washed-up as everybody thinks.

I’m not a huge baseball fan, nor am I an aficionado of sports manga. So, what was it about Cross Game that caught my eye?

1. Powerful simplicity – Unlike a lot of artists who rely on puppy-dog eyes and over-the-top distortion, Mitsuru Adachi conveys a ton of emotion with very simple character designs. He can dish out the detail, particularly in the baseball action scenes and landscapes, but it was his restraint that really struck me. Slight shifts in posture, the curve of a mouth, the angle of a glance–Adachi’s pictures really are worth a thousand words.

2. Strong moral themes – Perseverance in the face of opposition, fair play, hard work, respect, accountability, dealing with sorrow and suffering, and, of course, the rewards of teamwork. Characters stand up courageously against injustice and corruption. Good is rewarded, but not always right away, and evil gets its just desserts in time. Self-sacrifice is also a huge theme in Cross Game. Several characters put their own ambitions on the shelf to advance the dreams of their friends and loved ones. It ties in nicely with the baseball theme–the “sacrifice fly” is a standard tactic in which a batter hits into an out to move base-runners forward, and it’s an apt metaphor for much of what happens in Cross Game.

3. Low key humor – Like the artwork, the humor in Cross Game is usually very simple, but it always seems to be spot-on. When I laughed, which was fairly often, despite some of the very serious issues mingled in with the sports, I laughed big. Adachi regularly breaks the fourth wall in a variety of ways for a chuckle, from a supporting character who complains he’s not getting enough face time, to character debates on Adachi’s shortfalls as a cartoonist, to occasional cameo appearances within the story by the artist. Fun stuff.

4. Likable characters – Koh and his friends aren’t saints, but they’re good people, the sort of kids you wish there would have been more of in your high school or neighborhood. They’re loyal, and they look out for each other. They go out of their way to help people in trouble. Most of all, they don’t take themselves too seriously.

I’d rate this manga at a low PG-13 for some isolated profanity (mostly when characters are really upset) and a couple of gratuitous underwear shots, likely thrown in as fan-service for the teenage boys who are the target audience for this comic. If they’ve been to the beach, they’ve seen a lot worse. Cross Game is also available as an anime, but I’m not sure if there’s even a English-subtitled version out yet.

I haven’t been able to find Cross Game in the manga section of my local chain bookstores, though a search on Barnes & Noble.com came up with another Adachi manga, Short Program. Scanned digests of Cross Game in English are available at www.onemanga.com, but if you like it, and can find it, please support the artist by purchasing a hard copy.

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Posted by: SilentFred | January 22, 2010

Best of Every Day Fiction Two Anthology

Every Day Fiction, an online magazine that offers a new story of 1000 words or less every day, 365 days a year, is officially launching their second “best-of” anthology next week, but it’s available for orders right now–you can get either a hardcover or trade paperback version, each bearing the attractive cover art depicted above.

I’m proud to have a story among the many fine works in this volume. “Little Piece of Cloth” is a whimsical tale of a UFO salvage that uncovers something nobody ever expected. I had a lot of fun writing it–sort of a backhanded tribute to my Air Force days. Read More…

Posted by: SilentFred | January 20, 2010

I Found a Cool Story the Other Day, #11

Flash Fiction Online is one of the foremost purveyors of stories less-than-or-equal-to 1000 words–mordant, quirky tidbits of writing that make a perfect accompaniment to your morning coffee and croissant.

The current issue offers two meditations on death. “Last Bites,” by Ken Pisani, is a sweet little fable about those who have passed, and how we remember them. The bizarre premise gives way to a wistful observation about human nature that I thought both elegant and profound.

Hungry,” by Tree Riesener, paints a stark picture of a family member’s death through a little girl’s eyes, reminding us that the way we treat the old says something very important about our own character–something even our youngest can understand.

These are two stories I think will linger in your mind for a while. Read and enjoy.

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